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Mahmoud Aglan authored
Copy — the previous register read as marketing/AI boilerplate to a board audience. Removed the tells and rewrote in institutional MSA: - Drop staccato fragment headlines and their trailing periods ("ثلاثة محاور. لا أكثر." -> "نطاق المرحلة الأولى: ثلاثة محاور") - Drop rhetorical punchlines ("الاحتكاك يقتل الاشتراك."، "ليست صورًا تخيلية."، "من ينسى، لا يدفع.") for descriptive prose - Drop the «مصنع البيانات» metaphor and the pitch-deck eyebrow "لماذا الآن" - Rewrite all 8 prototype screen annotations from slogans to labels ("البوابة تعرف من يدخل" -> "الدخول بكود QR") - Reduce rhetorical em-dashes; keep structural ones only Schedule — project is 4-6 weeks, not 12. Timeline recompressed from six milestones over 12 weeks to five over 6, with the 4-week case stated as conditional on data and accounts landing in week 1. Updated hero stat, scope lede, price card, plan heading and footer badge to match. Design — elegant crest watermark: - Oversized club crest bleeding off the inline-start edge of the hero, gold-tinted, offset so it does not double with the hero logo - Alternating-side crest ghosts on problem/scope/flow/price sections - Crest in the price card and footer, plus a gold hairline on the footer - Uses background-image + filter, not mask-image: masks give a cleaner silhouette but do not paint in headless Chrome, so this variant is the one that can actually be verified before shipping - Logical properties throughout (inset-inline, margin-inline) so the watermark mirrors correctly in RTL - Added a prefers-reduced-motion guard for the scroll reveal Co-Authored-By:Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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