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    content(proposal): de-AI the Arabic, add crest watermark, rescope to 4-6 weeks · 783a14e6
    Mahmoud Aglan authored
    Copy — the previous register read as marketing/AI boilerplate to a board
    audience. Removed the tells and rewrote in institutional MSA:
    - Drop staccato fragment headlines and their trailing periods
      ("ثلاثة محاور. لا أكثر." -> "نطاق المرحلة الأولى: ثلاثة محاور")
    - Drop rhetorical punchlines ("الاحتكاك يقتل الاشتراك."،
      "ليست صورًا تخيلية."، "من ينسى، لا يدفع.") for descriptive prose
    - Drop the «مصنع البيانات» metaphor and the pitch-deck eyebrow "لماذا الآن"
    - Rewrite all 8 prototype screen annotations from slogans to labels
      ("البوابة تعرف من يدخل" -> "الدخول بكود QR")
    - Reduce rhetorical em-dashes; keep structural ones only
    
    Schedule — project is 4-6 weeks, not 12. Timeline recompressed from six
    milestones over 12 weeks to five over 6, with the 4-week case stated as
    conditional on data and accounts landing in week 1. Updated hero stat,
    scope lede, price card, plan heading and footer badge to match.
    
    Design — elegant crest watermark:
    - Oversized club crest bleeding off the inline-start edge of the hero,
      gold-tinted, offset so it does not double with the hero logo
    - Alternating-side crest ghosts on problem/scope/flow/price sections
    - Crest in the price card and footer, plus a gold hairline on the footer
    - Uses background-image + filter, not mask-image: masks give a cleaner
      silhouette but do not paint in headless Chrome, so this variant is the
      one that can actually be verified before shipping
    - Logical properties throughout (inset-inline, margin-inline) so the
      watermark mirrors correctly in RTL
    - Added a prefers-reduced-motion guard for the scroll reveal
    Co-Authored-By: 's avatarClaude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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